2008年7月11日金曜日

My Last Blog!

Let’s start today’s blog of mine! Today I will write about my ability to write. I have practiced writing until today. At first, I thought I could not write the blog every week. Because I had never done such a hard practice before I entered this university. When I was a junior high school student, I just learned how to write sentences in English. When I was a high school student, I learned how to write perfectly. Our teacher taught us right grammar, right spell and right words. Now I learned how to write about what I want to say or what I am thinking. It is a little difficult for me to express my feeling and use proper words. In addition, sometimes I take a few minutes to use a dictionary. However, compared with the before me I became to be able to write faster. I also can use more words effectively.
These are the biggest points, I think. During the writing practices of mine
I made some rules and trying to keep those rules. The first rule was to write simply and clearly. The second rule was to use words that people could imagine the scenes. The third rule was to write so that people could get interested in what I wrote. I am not sure if I could do these things. However, if it was not enough I will do my best to achieve these rules again. This feeling will help me write better things I think. When I see what other people wrote my writing seems to be the worst. Moreover, sometimes I lose my confident. However, I think writing is a kind of important communications as well as speaking. Therefore, I made an effort until today even though I was not good at writing. In this term, sometimes I had some troubles. When I wanted to do my homework by a computer, I could not use a computer very well, because, I had not learned how to use it effectively. In addition to that, I did not know how to use the header. Then one of my friends taught me the way of using it. So that now, I think I could develop my computer skills as well as writing.
What I still have to do is increasing my vocabulary. It is not always important to use difficult words, but if there are not vocabularies so much, I cannot choose words from my head properly. If there are not good vocabularies, I will not be able to use other words whose meanings are the same. Then readers will have to try so hard to read my writing. It means that the writing is not good. I think that this is the weakest point of mine. Therefore, I need to develop my vocabularies hard.
Next, let me write about what I want to do hard on my last essay in this term.
I am going to go to write about a detective story on my last essay. That detective story is a little bit long for me, but is really thrilling and interesting. When I was a high school student, I read the story for the first time. That was my homework in that summer vacation. There are good points in the story as a detective story. The first good point is that the way of a murder is confusing. So it is interesting for us to imagine how the victim was killed by the criminal. The second good point is that we cannot foresee the development. The situation is unexpected. So it is really excited. The third good point is that the characters in this story have their own features. In addition, they are filled with their humanities very much. Because there are many enjoyable points, I want to express these points in my word and tell what we can take from this story by my thesis statement. So I have to use convincing words or expressions. And I am going to do characterization. Therefore, I think I have to give the right image of the characters to readers. I wish readers could understand the relationships the characters’ feelings and my thesis statement.

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